Tuesday 5 September 2017

Word Ladder

In Ruma Rima we are learning to use words that are better than the normal word, we got told to do the word show here is my learning.


15 comments:

  1. Hi Brooklyn, my name is Ana Lei and I'm a year 8 student from SPX. I like how you showed your learning, but I don't quite understand what your trying to do. Other than that Keep it up!!

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    1. Hello Ana-Lei,
      We are doing words that are better than show

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    2. Oh thanks Brooklyn, I'm such an egg that I didn't notice before. I still love how you showed it though,

      ..Great Work!!

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  2. Hey Brooklyn,

    My name is Von and I'm a year 8 student from S.P.X school. Those are all fascinating words, I like the way you showed the graph together with the words because it shows your viewer how great those words are.

    If you want to find out about my learning here's the link to my blog: http://spxvont.blogspot.co.nz/

    Great Job, Keep it up!

    Von,

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  3. Kia ora Brooklyn, My name is Mikaela and I am a Year 7 intermediate student from St Pius X Catholic School.
    I think that your Word Ladder is very interesting because I have never heard or seen one before, literally. I also think that if you made more but with other words that would be great. Anyways great work with your Word Ladder and keep up your amazing work.

    Mikaela

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    1. The teacher told us to do that :) thanks for your comment!

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  4. KIA ORA Brooklyn. My name is Shanika. I like what words you said differently for show. Put you should move the top word so we can see the whole word.

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  5. Hi Brooklyn,
    I am Caroline. I am a year 8 currently attending to St Pius X School. I really love the way you display your work. I love the words you and your class are using! Keep up with your blogging!

    Your local blog commenter (Caroline) :)

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  6. Hi Brooklyn I really like how you have displayed your learning and showing other people what your working on.
    Next time I think you can add more detail about what your learning about.

    krystal.

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    1. I will try next time :) thanks for you comment!

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  7. Hi Brooklyn,
    My name is Aaliyah, a year 6 student currently attending St Pius X Catholic School. I really liked how you were presenting your learning. It shows that you and your class are working hard on vocabulary. I think next time you should add more explanation to your DLO so your viewers can understand exactly what you are learning. Other than that, I think you did an excellent job.
    Keep up the great work!

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    1. Ok thank Aaliyah, i will try next time. Thanks :)

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